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Thanks for coming","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=2.46,5.04"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/2","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"this afternoon. My name is Jason\nPuckett. On behalf of lyricists,","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=5.04,10.83"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/3","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"I want to welcome you to the\nwebinar this afternoon. As you","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=10.86,14.34"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/4","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"can see, from your screen, oops,\nI had the date wrong on my","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=14.34,19.14"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/5","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"slide. Sorry, I guess I updated\nmy slides yesterday. It's","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=19.17,23.73"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/6","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"October 26. As you can see from\nyour screen, we're going to be","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=23.73,28.29"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/7","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"talking about teaching online in\nplain language. My subtitle is","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=28.29,34.14"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/8","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"creating clear research guides,\nlibrary websites and online","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=34.14,37.83"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/9","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"instruction. Again, my name is\nJason Puckett. I'll tell you a","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=37.83,41.34"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/10","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"little bit about myself as we\ngo, as we begin, and I just want","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=41.34,48.39"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/11","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"to add, if you have questions\nduring the session, it's fine","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=48.39,52.98"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/12","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"with me, if you go ahead and\ntype them in chat as we are, as","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=52.98,57.84"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/13","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"I'm talking that is, I may not\nanswer them instantly. 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Schmidt and","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3323.31,3327.84"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/793","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"etches are always good, I\nhaven't looked to see what","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3327.84,3329.97"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/794","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"they've written in the last\ncouple of years. But that user","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3329.97,3332.79"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/795","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"experience design book is one of\nmy favourites, the SCAG article","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3332.79,3337.71"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/796","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"is a really good place to start\nfrom, and plain language.gov is","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3337.71,3342.93"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/797","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"a terrific resource. Any of\nthose actually are really good","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3342.93,3346.92"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/798","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"places. So I try not to give you\na huge bibliography. I see some","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3346.92,3351.24"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/799","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"typing. So I'm hoping some\nquestions are coming in. In the","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3351.24,3355.17"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/800","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"meantime, as I wait for\nquestions to finish typing, I'll","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3355.17,3358.68"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/801","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"just say thank you, and thank\nyou to lyricists, thank you to","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3358.68,3363.03"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/802","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"Shanaya for for assisting with\nthis presentation, thanks to","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3363.03,3367.47"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/803","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"lyricists for, for having me.\nAnd if you are interested in","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3367.47,3373.38"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/804","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"more about Usability Design, my\nbook on the right there modern","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3373.38,3376.38"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/805","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"Pathfinders is available from\nthe LA store. And I've got a","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3376.38,3381.87"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/806","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"book about Zotero, which we\ndidn't talk about today. But I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3381.87,3384.39"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/807","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"do talks about Zotero as well.\nEllen has a Kant comment here, I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3384.39,3388.98"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/808","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"can never think of other good\nwords for collections.","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3388.98,3391.47"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/809","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"Resources. 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And\nI don't have a good just sort of","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3399.0,3403.26"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/812","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"general purpose synonym that I\nuse for it. But that's","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3403.26,3408.15"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/813","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"definitely something that I\nstruggle with as well. What I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3408.15,3411.66"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/814","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"try to do is I try to rephrase\nit based on what the specific","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3411.66,3417.18"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/815","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"context is going to be. So\nrather than, you know, online","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3417.21,3422.61"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/816","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"resources or something like\nthat, if students know that they","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3422.61,3425.76"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/817","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"have to find articles. For an\nassignment, for example, I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3425.76,3431.1"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/818","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"would, I would call it something\nto do with finding articles.","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3431.1,3435.21"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/819","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"Even if you had a very\ninexperienced group of students,","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3435.24,3439.02"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/820","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"you could call them something\nlike article search tools,","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3439.02,3442.44"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/821","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"article, search engine,\nsomething like that. Again, you","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3442.47,3445.38"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/822","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"don't have to dumb it down. But\nkeeping in mind, terminology","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3445.38,3449.67"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/823","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"that is going to resonate or\nmake sense to your users, in","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3449.67,3454.71"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/824","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"that instructional context is\nthe most important thing. And I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3454.71,3458.7"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/825","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"certainly don't have the best,\nbest suggested synonyms for any","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3458.7,3462.9"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/826","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"case, but that's how I try to\napproach that question. Thank","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3462.9,3466.29"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/827","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"you, Ellen. Yeah, some,\nsometimes we just don't have","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3466.29,3469.08"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/828","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"good terminology. Sometimes you\nhave to use the library jargon","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3469.08,3473.79"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/829","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"that I had on that, that slide\nback there. And I thought this","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3473.82,3476.52"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/830","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"was a good sort of\nrepresentative list of jargon","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3476.52,3481.14"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/831","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"that I found from, you know,\nsort of gathered this with a","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3481.14,3483.96"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/832","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"little brainstorming. There are\nterms like circulation that we","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3483.96,3487.14"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/833","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"use all the time that I don't\nknow if that conveys anything to","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3487.14,3490.08"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/834","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"a student, certainly monograph\nor OPAC, probably doesn't. But","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3490.08,3494.19"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/835","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"then there are terms like\ndatabase that they're going to","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3494.19,3496.41"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/836","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"hear all the time, and that\nthey're their professors are","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3496.41,3500.7"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/837","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"going to be using and that they\njust need to learn that","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3500.7,3503.82"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/838","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"terminology as part of being a\nstudent. Yeah. They don't always","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3503.82,3506.91"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/839","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"know that even the term\nreference desk, I think we have","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3506.91,3509.37"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/840","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"rebranded ours as the Research\nServices Desk. I'm not sure","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3509.4,3513.39"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/841","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"whether that's an improvement or\nnot. Other questions? Thank you,","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3513.72,3519.09"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/842","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"Ellen. Appreciate that. We are\njust about out of time. I hope","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3519.09,3525.36"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/843","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"that this was useful, or at\nleast somewhat interesting to","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3525.36,3529.32"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/844","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"you. I'll go back to that\nbibliography. You should be","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3529.32,3534.06"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/845","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"getting a copy of the slides,\nincluding this bibliography. If","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3534.06,3537.93"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/846","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"not, let me know I'll put my\nemail address in chat here. And","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3537.93,3543.87"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/847","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"I'll be happy to send you a copy\nof the slides. But I think those","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3543.87,3546.6"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/848","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"are lyricists will share that\nwith you and it will be in the","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3546.6,3549.84"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/849","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"recording as well. And I see\nthat we are officially out of","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3549.84,3553.95"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/850","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"time. Thank you again, so much.\nlyricists. Thank you for","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3553.95,3557.46"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/851","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"inviting me. Thank you all for\ncoming today. We had a small,","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3557.46,3561.3"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/852","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"infinite But excuse me intimate\nbut dedicated group today. And I","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3562.02,3568.38"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/853","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"appreciate you all coming\nShanaya thank you for the tech","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3568.38,3570.69"},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/854","type":"Annotation","motivation":"transcribing","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"support and I hope everybody has\na great day.","format":"text/plain"},"target":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796#t=3570.69,3572.79"}]},{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473","type":"AnnotationPage","label":{"en":["English [Transcript]"]},"items":[{"id":"https://lyrasis.aviaryplatform.com/collections/3579/collection_resources/48435/file/130796/transcript/34473/annotation/855","type":"Annotation","motivation":"subtitling","body":{"type":"TextualBody","value":"https://d9jk7wjtjpu5g.cloudfront.net/file_transcripts/associated_files/000/034/473/original/_SubtitleTools.com__TeachingOnlineInPlainLanguage_20211026_01_otter_ai.vtt?1638367665","format":"text/vtt","language":"en"},"target":"https://d9jk7wjtjpu5g.cloudfront.net/file_transcripts/associated_files/000/034/473/original/_SubtitleTools.com__TeachingOnlineInPlainLanguage_20211026_01_otter_ai.vtt?1638367665"}]}]}]}